Are You Getting Hungry? My Quick Write Story: LOLLIES!

By Anonymous -
My shop is a sweet shop. I never get hungry.
Inside the shop is sweets in every colour of the rainbow, and a few colours that aren’t. There is also a small ice-cream factory at the back of the store, in which you can create your own flavours!
On the side of the shop is a lolly factory that makes every sweet ever in existence. Lemon juice, strawberry sauce and vanilla essence get creamed together into a soft,chewy lolly that has low sugar. Squished blueberries, cream and milk. Raspberries, vanilla ice cream and cinnamon. I love taste testing!
From the outside, the shop looks normal: discounts covering every inch of the windows and lots of customers streaming in. But inside the shop, everything seems better. It’s probably the smells of millions, no BILLIONS, of sweets being mixed together, and lifting everyone’s tension. As soon as you walk out of the store, you miss it so much you want to go back in. But then you look at the time, go back home, and dream about my amazing, fabulous, stunning, incredible… Sorry, I can think of 523 more synonyms for amazing, but I’d get bored at 10….


My shop is open 24/7 so anyone can get sweets, but most people don’t know that. Only a few people don’t think it’s open six hours a day, and those people are my friends. My friends are sometimes annoying, saying that  this doesn’t taste good and that doesn’t taste much better, but one the whole my friends are pretty good.

Oh, and one more thing. My sweet store is imaginary.

Comments

  1. Anonymous6 February 2017 at 17:37

    what a fabulous story-I feel so hungry for lollies that I will have to go out and buy some PEPPERMINT CREAMS- and read about willie wonka and chocolate factories--aarrgghh PEPPERMINT CHOCOLATE
    Laurie and Carole Greenfield

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  2. Anonymous6 February 2017 at 22:11

    Ug to good to be true. Sigh if only it was real.
    Are they all truly calorie free?
    You would put Cadburys out of business here. I love the way you describe things and the amazing visualization that comes from you imagination. It seems so real. I'd get so fat. Darren.

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  3. Shortly6 February 2017 at 22:16

    I love your writing Alison, it's very evocative. Super glad that you are my friend so I'd get 24/7 access. Mum

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  4. Anonymous9 February 2017 at 11:18

    Awesome that you thought to make the lollies low sugar:-). Maybe the next one could be ones that clean your teeth or maybe biodegradable wrapper.

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