Alison's Blog

I added some juicy details to this piece of writing. I added them in red pen. My writing now make s more sense. I hope you enjoy my finished story. 

This is my writing goal. This is my writing that I am going to edit and work on my goal. 

I am grateful for... my two cats because they give me a full heart,   my parents  because they by me things, my grandparents ( yes both sets of grandparents) because they by me things, my brother because he makes me laugh  

In te ara tika I 've been working on my mysteries dream classroom. It is very colourful and fancy. It will probably never come true. But you never ever know. In a faraway galaxy on a planet Marine World lived a group of mermaids. As the mermaids called school they had an extremely deep velvet blue pool, because all mermaids need to learn how to swim, an ice skating rink, a ROCKET to reach the starry sky, a library full of amazing ocean life, an unpleasant  naughty corner with only a blackboard (yawn) and chalk of different colours.  (Zzzzzzzzz snore) the mermaids teacher worked so hard all the mermaids bought their teacher a five star active board. The mermaids names are Alison, Sarah, Roxy, Jasmine and Olivia.

Thanks Alison for taking morning meeting today.  You were magnificent.

I've been doing heaps of reading. Lots and lots of Beanos . Reading  is awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!