My Writing so far...

This is my writing so far. It has NOT been edited or completed yet.

Climbing Wall

Okay. Georgie is at the top. Climbing wall ,here I come!
 I like climbing walls because I know which rocks I can reach without my feet falling of.
  I climb about one rock per one to four seconds. So does Georgie, my climbing partner. Georgie went up the wall before me.
    Up and up and up,up,up,up,up! Now we’re half way!

Comments

  1. It sounds like your are working really well as a team on the climbing wall. How did the instructors make sure that you were safe?

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  2. It sounds like your are working really well as a team on the climbing wall. How did the instructors make sure that you were safe?

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  3. Good work Alison!!! how did it feel to get half way? Your story is awesome so far!!

    Gypsy

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