Alison's Blog

This is my new writing goal. I got a new one because I achieved my last one. Every time I  my achieve a goal I feel great.

Yesterday Paula Green visited Frankley School. Amongst all the talking and poems, Paula gave us a challenge. It was to make up a poem with twelve or less words. Then today we went on a listening walk. When we got back, we made up lines of a poem. I made up a bit longer poem line that was a poem one it's own. I wrote the words down and cut them up. Then I arranged the lines of the poem and I have a poem. Here is what I came up with: Strong wind howling past me, making all the trees  dance.

I added some juicy details to this piece of writing. I added them in red pen. My writing now make s more sense. I hope you enjoy my finished story. 

This is my writing goal. This is my writing that I am going to edit and work on my goal.