Jade & Spring The Jewel Scepter

I’m writing a story about twins named Jade and Spring. They live in Kaikoura and then the earthquake hits. The get moved to a fairytale school in Australia. Here is a little bit of the story:

We all woke up and everything was normalish. Except half of Kaikoura was damaged or completely munted. All the roads to Kaikoura a blocked, and lots of schools are closed. Spring’s happy, she never gets good grades anyway.

A month passes and mum and dad pull us into their room. They say, “You know how the living room ceiling is damaged,” they said. “We don’t have any money to fix it, and we have to fix it, so we are going to have to send you two to a boarding school in Australia”

I sighed, Spring swore, and we both headed of to our rooms to start packing.

This chapter is written from Jade’s point of view. Spring and Jade take turns at narrating the chapters.

The full story is coming soon!

Comments

  1. This is coming along nicely - for those of us have read the first chapter it fits in well, and I like the character development too. Keep it going Alison :)

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  2. interesting idea to have alternate characters writing the chapters.You say the full story is coming soon-how soon is soon?

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  3. oops ,22 nov comment was from grannygrandadgreenfield

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